Hi Raymond:

Sorry, no can do.

We pulled it years ago when Jeff ran into legal troubles for actions we could in no way begin to defend.

If the recording still exists, it’s on a backup drive somewhere in Stan or John’s storage cabinets.

Hi Barry: There is a lot more involved in conversion than just your copy, but just looking at the letter I have a few comments:

1. Take out all the links (including the opt in at the bottom) and just have “Contact”, “Privacy” and “Terms and Condidtions”. This includes all the links at the top, the links to social media at the side, and the…Read more

Hi Woody: Frustrating, isn’t it! I don’t think there is an easy way to get directly to the SWS Coaching Sales letter. I will give you a link but have to get some info from Stan first. Just want to let you know I saw this and am working on it.

Sorry for the inconvenience.

When I click on the SWS classrooms link, I get sent to here:

John Carlton’s Simple Writing System Pint of Beer Ad Challenge Registration

Hi Woody: You should be sent to a page that says “oops, wrong membership level”. In any case, I will get back to you about how to sign up for coaching.

If you are not sent to the “wrong level” page and could create a screencast video (jing or the equivalent) it would be very helpful to me. Thanks

Yes, I am sent to that “oops…” page. However, there’s no link to join the coaching program.

I will get you the instructions as soon as Stan gets back to me. And I will update that page. Thanks

Hi Woody: Please open a support ticket at http://www.MarketingRebelSupport.com and Anne will help you.

Thanks.

Nice video, Volker. You have a lot of bullet points in there. I would put them as high in the copy as you can. Can you add lines beneath where you say: Discreetly grow plants for yourself and maybe a friend?

If so, I would list the bullet points there. Just go through your video and list all the features you mention, along with a benefit for…Read more

I see you joined the Simple Writing System. That will help you a lot, and if you really apply yourself you can get through it in less than a month. When I took it I did my first pass through in 3 weeks. Good luck to you. Colin is a great teacher.

Hi Virginia,

thank you for the tips!

“Can you add lines beneath where you say: Discreetly grow plants for yourself and maybe a friend?”

– No, so I added them into the body, high up.

I have removed the word ‘discreet’ anyways.

Thank you

Hi Volker,

I loved your video. I suspect the no matter how Tomato Tent goes, you’re going places as a marketer and business owner.

You’ve ventured into a small and competitive market here. As you point out, the cost of product development is high. Even a small vegetable growing system takes up space, produces odors, and is prone to things lik…Read more

Hi Stan,

thank you for saying this:

“…you’re going places as a marketer and business owner”.

It keeps popping back up in my head because nobody has ever said that to me. Thank you.

As a side, please fix the Mitch Tarr (Zin Marketing) link. Those bullet points alone, I can extremely benefit from and get up to speed with. Thanks in advance!

I think that people will search out and travel a bit to go to a good restaurant, so it doesn’t really have to be in a specific neighborhood to be successful. There do seem to be some restaurant locations that aren’t successful no matter who is there, but I think that is the minority, and I am not really sure what would cause that.

The links on the post for Mitch’s call have been fixed.