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DOtheDamnWORK posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago · updated 7 years, 11 months ago
Hello, my name is Donovan. I’m new here and on a mission to unfold the story inside me. Resistance wakes up by my side everyday. It’s time to write. I look forward to engaging in this community that I’ve heard so much about.
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Martin Morris posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago · updated 7 years, 11 months ago
I am writing ad to help personal trainers get clients by writing ad on how overweight people afraid to come to gym so train on own taking 18-48 months. I am trying to show how training alone they are losing money, impacts, on sex life, and job opportunities. I am finishing my research. I want to learn what words to use other than fat..overweight…Read more
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Hi Martin: Did you search Thesaurus.com? That will give you alternatives.
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You could also look at ads for weight loss products and see what words they use.
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AnttiK posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago · updated 7 years, 11 months ago
Hi, my name is Antti. I have small local service business and I am here to learn how to promote and market my business. Word of mouth takes too long and it is something you can’t really rely on. So I will be looking for local business marketing ideas and examples. Thank You.
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Hi Antti: Welcome to the Club! What type of service do you provide?
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Hi Virginia. I provide car detailing services. Niche inside detailing is paint polishing and paint corrections. New car prep. And Ceramic coatings for cars.
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I assume you are in the US. The first thing you have to do is fill out your Google Local (or whatever they call it now) listing, There are other directories as well (Bing, Yellow Pages, I don’t remember all of them). Make sure your phone number, address and business name are exactly the same in all of them.
You can also run Facebook ads. They…Read more
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There is another thing the Post Office has where you can get a flyer/postcard delivered to all addresses in a certain zip code. I’m not sure what they call it but it is something you can look into if you are not yet familiar with it. Your local post office can explain it and tell you how much it costs.
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Thank you for the info.
I have local listings( Google Business, ranking high in my area. Also I have studied youtube and can rank easily for local city keywords. I have tried Facebook ads.
What I want to learn here is copywriting and ad writing.
Postcards for general area is not really what I am after.
My target market is new car buyers. What I…Read more
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Hi Antti: You came here at a good time. Stan and John just released the Simple Writing System Express course. It is free and gives you the basics you need to write compelling copy. Just go to http://www.SimpleWritingSystem.com (or click on the banner in the right column) and opt in. You will receive a PDF immediately and access to the video tomorrow.
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Thank You. That’s great. I am away at the convention this weekend, but will start reading as soon as I am done with it.
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Hey Anttik. If you have the offer right the copywriting won’t have to be as good. You have to give the a reason to come to you. If you can give them something Free or super low cost that the person would think was High priced. An example say would be interior detail thats worth $300 but it only costs you in reality $50 to do with your staff time…Read more
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Jose Ayala posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago · updated 7 years, 11 months ago
Hey guy’s
I’m having some trouble with swiping.
Obviously I have John’s swipe files and also from other copywriters.
Here’s what my days and nights look like:
I wake up to go to my dead end 9-5 (8:30 – 5:30) (actually) and all my brain thinks about is COPYWRITING
I’ve been at that job for 12years and just recently (2years ago) I found out…Read more-
For example: from John’s freelance course.:
Here’s what I’ve got for you: After privately mentoring a small mob of freelance copywriters (helping them multiply their results, their client-base, and their wealth many times over)…
… I decided to reach more wanna-be freelancers by cramming everything I know about the gig into an info-packed course…Read more
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That’s not bad. The last part, though, doesn’t make sense (show you what to expect and what to do all my knowledge transfer to your brain.) The part starting with “all my knowledge…” is not good English.
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Haha yeah felt weird when I wrote it
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Harlan Kilstein (one of the Simple Writing System coaches) is a king of swiping copy. He created a video several years ago that shows how he swipes copy. You can see it here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A8RRz9isIfQ
Also, FYI, John and Stan are releasing the Simple Writing System Express course, which is free. It doesn’t talk about swiping…Read more
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They also say you should swipe copy from one industry to another, like you did here. That way there is less likelihood that anyone will recognize it.
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Awesome thanks!
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Kathy Donchak posted an update 7 years, 11 months ago · updated 7 years, 11 months ago
Hello, I am Kathy Donchak, and my two most pressing needs are to systematically improve my presentation copy skills and also learn how to draft emails that get opened and read.
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Hi Kathy: John and Stan just released their Simple Writing System Express course, which teaches the basics that you need to know to write effective copy. It is free. Just go to http://www.SimpleWritingSystem.com and opt inl You will receive a PDF right away and a link to the video tomorrow.
That should help you get startec.
We also have a series…Read more
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Thank you for such as fast welcome! I dove into the Simple Writing System already and ordered the Freelance Course. I will check out the “Get your emails delivered, opened and acted upon”- next. I am already learning so much. Glad to be here.
Kathy
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Hi Donovan: Welcome to the Club!
One thing you should do is check out the Simple Writing System Express Course. It is free and won’t be available much longer. Go to http://www.SimpleWritingSystem.com