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Hi Dean. The Freelance Course should be your priority right now, if finding clients is a sticking point. The fundamental truth is that the biz world is starved for good freelance copywriters who can handle the gig, and once you understand how it all works, you can approach new clients with confidence.

Plus, you’ll have better ideas on how to find…Read more

Take a cold shower every day for a week. Because it doesn’t hurt and won’t kill you. It’s just uncomfortable. And you’ll just have to do uncomfortable things. Even though they’re good for you. Anyway, that’s what I did when I realized my life was going somewhere I didn’t like. Who said that “Every business problem is a personal problem in…Read more

hey mate! as a fellow non-native, I’d definitely recommend reading “Elements of Style”, by Strunk & white. It’s very short, John Carlton recommends it all the time, and it includes FUNDAMENTAL things you’ve likely never heard (and almost def. don’t practice). I’d reaf it very slowly, making sure to *get* everything – read a chapter, and then read…Read more

Just bought myself the freelance copywriter course! can’t wait!

Hi Jay: To start with…this is not really what you are asking, but here are a couple of quick suggestions re your site.

Your visitors care about themselves, not you. You start out talking about yourself…how you cured it. Not how the reader can cure it. It may sound like a small thing, but it is very important. It could be something as…Read more

Jay – Throw out the copy (including video) & write it again. Line out every word that doesn’t need to be there. Starting with all of the “do you feel… are you scared…” stuff. You don’t need to tell them the are “Barrett’s Patients & Friends”.

Nobody cares you were scared or frustrated or whatever. If they or a loved one has this, they k…Read more

Hi Jay: I would become a student of alternative health sales copy. Get on the mailing lists of the big mailers…the ones sending out the large magalogs. They all have an army of highly paid lawyers pouring over their copy. Don’t say anything that is not backed up by experience. You could also have testimonials from people who used your…Read more

I just checked and the hot seat is available now. Look under John Carlton’s Corner/Live Hot seats and copy critiques, and it is called “let your testimonials tell your story”. It should have been removed last Sunday but I will leave it up for another week so you can watch it.

You are sending people from your landing page to a form they have to fill out which, I assume, goes to your sales page. Are people filling out the form and not buying, or are they clicking through from the landing page to this form and not filling out the form?

So people are going to your landing page and most of them are clicking through but not entering their info and clicking through to the sales page? That means they are curious but not yet ready to buy.

The fist thing I’d do is take the price off the opt-in page and only ask for their name and email at first. The more information you make them…Read more

Your original comment got lost in the shuffle. I am pasting it here:

Hey Friends, great advice. I made the landing page warmer and more emotional and it is converting at 37% compared to 14% to the previous one. http://bit.ly/1gV1Dv8. The only problem is that the payment page still isnt converting.. 0% Very sad. I am like the lady on the home…Read more

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