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The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 1 year, 7 months ago
John Carlton's Best Ads: The Naked Girls All Laughed Behind The Little Pudgy Guy's Back…Most self-defense ads try hard to look tough. Like the product is tough, the talent is tough, even the receptionist answering the phones is tough. […]
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Khye Baker posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago · updated 1 year, 8 months ago
Hi, buddydrive is not working, the page is just blank. However, I would love if someone could review this copy, I’ve never really had a good copywriter review my stuff, which I realised is not a good thing, I have put the google drive link below:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jkhDkau34x8RVmdx5-j1O7oDw_JDYwAU/view?usp=sharing
Thank you.
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Craig Dennis posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago · updated 1 year, 8 months ago
Hey, Would love it if someone could review my copy, please. This is a sales email trying to sell a blogging course for freelance writers. I’ve added more details at the top of the PDF
https://1023.marketingrebelclub.com/buddydrive-5/file/blogging-framework-for-1000-email-1/
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There are a couple of things you can test:
1. More upbeat subject line. You are being negative talking about 1-star reviews. Try something positive… what do they want rather than what they don’t want? Something like; Get rave reviews and repeat assignments from your clients, or something like that.
2. You tend to ramble on in your…Read more
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>> These are people who still write for content
mills. <<All these people should want to learn is how to use ChatGPT (and the rest) to write content articles. The profession of the mediocre content writer is done. They join the folks who shod horses in New York City in moving from a thriving business to all of NYC needing maybe 4 of them and…Read more
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The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 1 year, 8 months ago
John Carlton's Best Ads: The Human ComputerThis letter almost set a record for the shortest time spent as a control at Phillips Publishing (the newsletter giant)… but it wasn’t my fault. […]
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Bob Bly Reveals: Key Techniques to Transform Your Copywriting and Marketing SkillsIn this call, David and Bob Bly discuss the details of copywriting and marketing. Bob shares important tips on how to make compelling offers and […]
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Can someone please review
Hi Khye,
Thanks for posting this for feedback.
Let me get right to the point. — Which you kind of did after rambling for 2 page —
It’s not good.
You have Carlton’s Kick-Ass Copywriting Secrets.
Go through it again.
Notice how he gets right to the paint points of the market and presents solutions.
No “let me ramble and repeat myself…Read more
Thank you for this, I see exactly what you’re saying, I will start over.