[Pint of Beer] I can’t get Jayne to sign-off on the project, again.

On every project getting her to sign off takes forever!

If I to talk with her, two hours go by and no signature. She always waits until I sm up against explaining why I am late.

It feels like she’s holding out her signature just to spend more time with me, and when I didn’t…Read more

(revised direction since call)
MAKE YOURSELF & YOUR COMPANY EASIER TO WORK WITH FASTER!!!

Revealing a stealth ACCELERATION technique so effective, people will call you Inspiring!

Business
Behavioral Change

What your Direct-Reports, Stakeholders, and
Bosses Wish You Knew About Them,
That Will Make Working With You Easy,
Using a 1,000+ Year…Read more

Hi Ben: Did you submit your revision so David could address it on the next call? That’s what I would do, because there is more continuity when you have one person giving you advice.

Hi Alejandro: I would pick up John’s Freelance Course. It’s not expensive and will show you a path to start your career. It is sold as a package with Kickass Copywriting Secrets, so if you order, make sure to click on the link that says Freelance Course Only (there is a discount), since you already have the other course.

Hi Sue,

I was interested in Alchemy.
Revealed: The Secret Alchemy Formula To Get Clients & Turn Your Words Into ATM
Wisdom From Transforming A Dead Broke Chinese Village Girl
[my gf is 50% Chinese and was horrified to see her dad’s village]
To American Business Coach…
[that’s a complex idea when I want magic, and being a Business Coach…Read more

Thanks for your feedback Ben! Appreciated your insights and sharing your gf story and document.

My sales letter needs a total rewrite… I’m not satisfied with it. I share too much of myself, and there are too many things I am selling at the sale time:

-importance of words
-Facebook ads
-webinar

I had to explain why coaches need all these…Read more

Hi David: One thing I’d like to suggest is that you check out the (free) Pint of Beer Ad Challenge. Just go here to opt in: https://simplewritingsystem.com/sws-pobc-summer-2021/.

It shows you a simple way to create a good ad. It is a good place to get started.

I see you have Kick-Ass Copywriting Secrets. That will give you some great ideas, as well.

Hi Sue:

What makes you think that it is the copy of the ad that needs help? To answer your question, the ad looks OK to me. I am not in your target market, but I think that if I was, this would tempt me to click through.

Here are my thoughts on some other things that will also affect your opt in rate.

An 11% opt in rate may be bad or good, it…Read more

Very insightful! Thanks so much Virginia!!! The click through rate is fine, average 1.5%. I’m split testing two audiences, one is demographic only, moms with kids 1-8 years old. Another audience is moms who follows some business/self-help gurus. I noticed that the ad is promising get over stress and worries, but the landing page is about…Read more

Probably the most important thing is the followup. Most people will not buy right away, so be sure to keep contacting them with more info, and keep asking them to buy.

This is a webinar funnel, so there should be some applications right off the webinar. Right now we have so few results to make any conclusions, only 12 webinar registrations so far.

For my own webinar funnel, most (almost all at this point, after 160 webinar registrations) people come from the webinar not email follow up… (My email skills need…Read more