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Tamara posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago · updated 2 years, 4 months ago
Any Landing Page People in here that can show me some examples of what works best for them.
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Vikram Chatterjee posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago · updated 2 years, 4 months ago
Hello, how do I go from zero dollars to a small funnel with no target audience
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Tamara posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago · updated 2 years, 4 months ago
IS there a meeting today? How do I get the link?
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The meeting link is in the emails you get. I assume you are receiving emails because you had the link to submit copy. There is a zoom link there, also.
Did you receive an email this morning?
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No, It was a glitch in my email getting in the system. Anne emailed me. I entered the copy through the website link because I never received an email about the calls. We know why now, because I wasn’t in the system. Thanks have a good day
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Sorry about that. I will make sure you are on the list from now on.
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They did review your copy, though. The video will be posted tomorrow. If you don’t get the email, just access the Inner Circle home page through the top menu (Premium Products/David’s Inner Circle) and there will be a link there to the latest session recording. It will be up tomorrow morning.
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Cool that will be nice to look at. I have a lot more stuff so I am glad we got that one out of the way .. it was more a tester to see how things work. I am actively working with a very high end client with a lot of needs so I will using this to it’s fullest. Hoping to get some mentoring… we shall seeeeee
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Tamara posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago
Hey Everyone… anybody ever write for medical? I am looking to network with writers and it’s a bit quiet in here. I also saw some negative kickback but we can’t move if we don’t, well, move… lol .. So If anyone wan’t to chat and talk shop about copywriting, our netowork is our biggest growth factor and While David, Stan, John, and the crew are…Read more
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Suraj Punjabi posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago · updated 2 years, 4 months ago
Critique my copy please:
https://1023.marketingrebelclub.com/buddydrive-5/file/copy-squad-submission-9_13_22/
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Did you write these?
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Hey Virginia, yes I did.
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@virginia would love to get some feedback on these?
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Hi Suraj: Sorry for the slow response. Overall, I think your emails are very good, and it looks like they are in use already, which tells me that you have tested them or are testing them right now. That, obviously, is the best way to tell what will work and what won’t. I have a few suggestions about things you might want to test:
1. 10…Read more
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Hi Tamara: The best thing to do is look at landing pages from your competitors, because that way you can see what works in your market.