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Togara Marechera posted an update 12 months ago · updated 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Hi Everyone. I am pumped up. John Carlton you are my copywriting idol. I would like you to make some criticism on what I have just posted to my group.
I have this free weight loss group I am running and people in it are raving about it. So I wrote a piece of content…
Basically I used eye relief and I am preparing people for a paid launch.…Read more
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Togara Marechera posted an update 12 months ago · updated 12 months ago
I wrote this last year and barely got good responses. How can I make it better?
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A yearly subscription fee of 10us.
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1. Getting all your questions answered.
2. Twice weekly posts on areas sabotaging your health so you can enjoy robust health.
A 65 year old, male came to my surgery with…Read more
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Hi Dr. Marechera: If it were I, I would start posting videos on YouTube that answer questions your patients have now. Then you can build an audience and sell the membership site. I think your price is quite low, which may make people believe that it is not worth much, but if you develop a YouTube channel you will get (for free) an audience…Read more
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Thank you, Virginia. I have a bit of audience on WhatsApp which is close to 1500 people. I am also working to boost that number. I am so shy of camera, hoping to overcome that so that I can start posting on YouTube
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Yeah, you gotta get over yourself and stop being shy. The meek are not rewarded in the real world of marketing.
Virginia has some solid advice for you — your next best move would be to follow up on that, get some traction with that audience you already have. You can spend a lifetime wondering what you “should” do, and never get anything done.…Read more
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Thank you, John
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Togara Marechera posted an update 12 months ago
Hi Marketing Rebels. Dr Togara Marechera here from Zimbabwe. I am new here.
I am a medical doctor with a interest in natural remedies.
I joined Marketing rebel club to make people take action…
…and subscribe to my paid online groups.
The groups offer intergrative methods that fight disease.
I would like at least 1000 people to join
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The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 1 year ago
John Carlton's Best Ads: Butt-Ugly GolfI’ve written something like 4,000 direct mail letters and direct response ads for golf products now. Okay, that’s a bit of an exaggeration, but […]
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Raiyan Anwaar posted an update 1 year ago · updated 1 year ago
Do people still use SRDS to find hot buyers?
If not is there any other good research methods to find out what type of products your target costumers are spending their money on?
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Hi Raiyan. The SRDS has traditionally a place where you can find lists to mail to (either through snail mail or email). It’s a marketplace for list brokers who have lists they rent out.
As a research tool to find out how hot markets are, the SRDS still exists (caveat: I have not visited the site in a while, so things may have changed) as a…Read more
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Hi, Tagara,
I like how you’re turning out and posting content here.
Your writing is not bad.
First, I would clean up the English a bit — run it through a spell-checker or grammar-checker or have someone read it over.
Read it out loud, make sure it flows and sounds pleasing to the ear.
But mainly, your writing is a bit unfocused — it ram…Read more
Hi, David
Thank you for replying to my message.
You are spot on. I struggled with English at school. I could calculate maths without thinking but English yoh.
I have someone who proof-reads for me, and sometimes use AI. The AI changes my thoughts though.
Despite my English, I really want to be a good copywriter.
This is what I am doing, David,…Read more