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Mostafa Salama posted an update 4 years, 8 months ago · updated 4 years, 8 months ago
Hi guys
I’m a new member here
Just finished the copy-writing course
I wrote this letter, can you criticize it, any feedback appreciatedback pain & sciatica cured guaranteed.docx – Google Driveback pain & sciatica cured guaranteed.docx – Google… -
Paul Hobart posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago · updated 4 years, 8 months ago
Two-legged golf pro looking to leverage the online world and stop trading hours for dollars. Big fan of JC and looking forward to learning and contributing!
Dabbled in IM with an ebook and videos but then fell back into teaching individual golf lessons. Like to be better prepared when the next \”closing of the world\” happens.
Cheers all!
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Hi Paul: I would definitely suggest you continue making videos on a regular basis. Maybe start a Facebook group and do it using Facebook Live? Then you can build up your audience and will have a ton of product you can use to start your digital empire. I would also put the videos on Youtube. Start a YouTube channel and there are ways to go…Read more
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In case you don’t know, John’s major golf client (with Doc O’Reilly) is OHP Direct (www.ohpdirect). They have a ton of content online and would be good to check out for inspiration.
They used to post all the full-length sales letters online. I went to the Wayback Machine and found an old copy of the site.
This was the product page which shows…Read more
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Sorry, Doc O’Leary, not O’Reilly. Should have looked it up.
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Remy Van der Kley posted an update 4 years, 8 months ago · updated 4 years, 8 months ago
Hi, I\’m among the lot of newcomers. So in short. I want to create some info products and funnels first, b/c I like the products and proces too. Also upgrade some work I\’m doing for others.
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Hi Remy: Sounds like a good plan. When you have questions, please post them here.
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Jose Rios Faundez posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago · updated 4 years, 8 months ago
Hello group, I am happy to be here learning from those who know. Since a couple of years ago I dedicated myself to digital marketing, today I want to deep my knowledge to be more effective in obtaining customers. By the way, sorry for My English si not really good.
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Hi Jose: Your English is very good. If you have any specific questions, please post them here.
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Thomas Fouts posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago · updated 4 years, 8 months ago
Glad to be here. I am going to slip out of retirement and start an online business. I enjoyed it the first time despite being banged around a bit early on.
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Sounds great, Thomas. Any questions, feel free to post them here.
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Hi Mostafa: You purchased the course 3 days ago, finished it and wrote this letter? I am guessing that you had some copy experience before purchasing the course. If not, you are the fastest study and quickest copywriter I have seen.
Congratulations on taking action so quickly! This letter looks pretty good right out of the box. You do need…Read more
Comment by Mostafa:
@virginia-drew
Hi Virginia
Thank you for your reply
yes part of the letter was in my previous letter i wrote but mostly I wrote it as new.
It is a real business and service here is my website: goptfirst.com
the testimonials are already posted on google by my patients.
I tried to do the headline like this corn gone in 5 days or…Read more
You are in a market of sharks. A lot of them don’t care about fines (or even jail sentences) because they make so much money that those are considered business expenses. You and I can’t play that game, so you have to be careful about your claims.
Of course, I can’t speak to the motivations of the specific advertiser you mention. I am speaking…Read more
@Mostafa I deleted your comment and added it to this thread. It gets confusing if there are more than one threads about the same thing. Just click on “comment” below your original post if you want to reply. Thanks