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The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 11 years ago
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Jason Cliff posted an update 11 years, 1 month ago · updated 11 years ago
I would really appreciate your feedback on my website that I am creating for my company. Your time and feedback will be very much appreciated. You can see it at freeleadtools.com
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Jason Cliff posted an update 11 years, 1 month ago · updated 11 years ago
Do the links on the Scuttlebut sessions work? The page does not seem to have any content other then the description?
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The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 11 years, 1 month ago
John Carlton Copywriting Tip: Get Started Writing by Reading
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Hi Jason. I just checked out your site.
When asking for critiques on anything, it’s good to give some background — like, for example, are you already getting traffic or sales to this page? If not, how are you going to get leads, and what kind of prospects are you looking for?
In this case, your perfect prospect would be an online company or an…Read more
Thank you very much for your time. I can’t tell you how much I appreciate it.
I narrowed down the focus to a company that has a marketing manager who is looking to add an Email Marketing / CRM manager to their team.
Here is the first paragraph rewritten:
Your Full Service Email Marketing Team Is Ready
Effective Email marketing is critical to…Read more