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Nina Hall posted an update 6 years, 10 months ago · updated 6 years, 10 months ago
Hello All,
I am a newbie to the club, copywriting and owning a business. I am trying to reach out to stylist and wrote my own sales copy. My PR person feels I should do more graphics and less words so, now I am confused should i go with a sales copy or the person I struggle to pay..Trying to post it however it keeps giving me problems…hopefully…Read more -
Nina Hall posted an update 6 years, 10 months ago
https://1023.marketingrebelclub.com/buddydrive-5/file/sales-copy-1b/
Here is the sales copy…
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Alternative to Google Keyword Planner
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Liam posted an update 6 years, 10 months ago · updated 6 years, 10 months ago
Not looking for help at the moment, just having a mooch around.
Having recently devoured the Kick-Ass Copywriting Secrets book, and signed up here as a result, I’m looking forward to learning more.
I’m from the UK, and – after recently selling a cryptocurrency startup, I’m trying to brush up on my copy skills for a new launch later this year.…Read more
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Hi Liam: Welcome to the Marketing Rebel Insider’s Club! When you have questions, please post them here. What will your new launch be for?
You may want to apply for a hot seat and have John and Stan review your launch plans and get their advice. It is always good to get ideas from people who are not as invested in your project as you are.…Read more
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One other thing…you should opt in to the Simple Writing System Express Course. It is free, and will help you further refine both your customer avatar and what you do for him/her. Just click on the Simple Writing System banner and you will be directed to the opt in page.
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Hi Nina
Congratulations on taking action! I have a few comments that hopefully will put you on the right track.
Re images: You may want to put in a few images, but you don’t have to do that now. I wouldn’t worry about them at this point.
Your copy is confusing. You talk about showing the prospect how to become a freelance artist, escaping…Read more
Thank you I will revise it tonight…
Yes slay is a term we use however I can use another word. We will add pics..also I see how freelancing can be confusing, as a booth renter we are behind the chair but have days when we work off site….which is probably a better word to use….Thank you again . I did do the simple writing course, clearly I…Read more