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The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 3 years, 7 months ago
This is one of the first letters I wrote for Gary Halbert. And it almost killed me.
You see, I was already a hard worker. When I went solo as a freelance writer, I had one rule: Business before pleasure. I […]
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Xeiffers posted an update 3 years, 7 months ago · updated 3 years, 7 months ago
Hello. Good Morning to you,
My name is Xavier but my nickname is Xeiffers.
I’m a web designer and I’m carrying out a web project through online courses to help entrepreneurs who want to have their own online business.I’m studying Copywriting to improve my landing page, my texts in general so that the whole website can be more effective.…Read more
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Tim schlecht posted an update 3 years, 7 months ago · updated 3 years, 7 months ago
Good morning to all members,
I was looking to get some feedback on a sales letter I wrote.
The customer is a homeowner who had a Tax Foreclosure happen to them at some point.
This business is a little different than the run of the mill.
The quick overview is the homeowner has a good amount of money coming to them from their home being…Read more-
Hi Tim:
Congratulations on taking action and writing this letter. You are way ahead of others that think about it and think about it and never get anything done.
I think you are trying to do too much with one letter. You are going to people who don’t know you from Adam and in 4 pages trying to get them to hire you. That is just not…Read more
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Hi Virginia, Thanks for checking it out and the feedback. I’ll do check that out asap. Yep it was my first attempt at writing.
Thank you, Tim
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Tim schlecht posted an update 3 years, 7 months ago · updated 3 years, 7 months ago
Hi, I’m very excited to be here.
Most of my career was in commercial photography. I’m old film dude, but digital kicks ass.I retired at 46, moved to Hawaii for six months, moved back to the states.
I’m ready to get busy again, I been here for about two weeks.
I just finished the kick ass copy set. Time to start it again and let it sink…Read more-
Hi Tim: Welcome to the Club. If you have any questions, please post them here.
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Taryn Scherer posted an update 3 years, 7 months ago · updated 3 years, 7 months ago
I’m Taryn, a Realtor, and I’ve joined so that I can write great copy for sales letters, emails, and video marketing. I’m frustrated with all the junk I’m given from Real Estate Coaches that are the same old junk. Looking forward to learning and putting it into action for success!
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Hi Taryn: Welcome to the Club and to the Kickass Copywriting Secrets course. I know you will get a lot out of it. You might also check out the (free) Simple Writing System Express course. Just click the link in the “Simple Writing System” banner to the right.
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John Carlton’s Best Ads: Hyper-Effective Cover Letters #1 — My All-Time Favorite Cover Letter
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John Carlton’s Best Ads: Short, Old-As-Dirt “Nice Guy” Finishes First
Let's count the ''tricks" I pulled out of my bag for this ad: A take-away superscript. (Gone in 11 days.) Instant urgency. Long headline. A compelling "not what you expected" type of headline. This is self-defense ...and yet we're talking about old short guys in the...
John Carlton’s Best Ads: We Screwed Up Big Time
Here is a good example of a "lipstick" letter. The reference is to the old comedy routine of coming home with lipstick on your collar -- and obviously dire situation that would crush a normal man. But a top – notch salesmen should be able to talk his way out of...
John Carlton’s Best Ads: The “Piss Everyone Off and Then Apologize” Letter
Here is the letter I mention in “Kick-Ass Copywriting Secrets” where the personalized headline enraged so many people. I was only trying for a “visceral” connection in the headline — you know, give people’s hot button about vulnerability a gentle rap. Get a reaction.
Boy, did it ever cause a reaction…
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Hi Xeiffers: Welcome to the Marketing Rebel Insider’s Club and to the Kickass Copywriting Secrets course. It is a great course and I know you will learn a lot.
I am also going to make the same suggestion I made to Tim. Check out the (free) Pint of Beer Ad Challenge. Just go here to opt in: https://simplewritingsystem.com/sws-pobc-summer-2021/