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Max Robertson posted an update 3 months ago · updated 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Hey, question about a 1:1 coaching landing page.
I have written a fairly long (3000 word) page to sell my clients 1:1 coaching “free call” for life coaching (however her’s has a unique patented method which is what makes it unique and new to the market)
This a backend landing page where either they have come directly from a masterclass group…Read more
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Hi Max
It looks like you have written copy and have at least one client. I would suggest you join David Deutsch’s Inner Circle. It is very inexpensive and David will personally review your copy and answer your questions on his live (2x/month) zoom calls. You can check it out here: https://alistcopysecrets.com/david-deutsch-inner-circle/
Hi, Max,
I must somewhat immodestly agree with Virginia that my Inner Circle is the place for you.
For starters, I really need to see the copy.
Copy has to be long enough to do the job. It can’t be “too long”. Only too boring or not compelling enough.
Just as importantly, it seems to me that your biggest opportunity for growth and success is…Read more
Ok, I’ve checked it out.
I will get it tomorrow! Thanks guys.
Hi Max: I see you joined David’s Inner Circle. There is a session coming up on Thursday, so please get your copy in so he can review it. You should be getting emails with the link.