Welcome back to the club!
What’s happening in the Clubhouse
Click here to join the conversation
Latest Activity
-
The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 11 years ago
John Carlton Marketing Tips: How to Beat the System In this marketing hotseat, John Carlton and Harlan Kilstein explain how to find out what’s really working if your company doesn’t give you the […]
-
Jason Cliff posted an update 11 years, 1 month ago · updated 11 years ago
I would really appreciate your feedback on my website that I am creating for my company. Your time and feedback will be very much appreciated. You can see it at freeleadtools.com
-
Jason Cliff posted an update 11 years, 1 month ago · updated 11 years ago
Do the links on the Scuttlebut sessions work? The page does not seem to have any content other then the description?
-
The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 11 years, 1 month ago
John Carlton Copywriting Tip: Get Started Writing by Reading In this clip from a marketing John Carlton and Harlan Kilstein say that in order to get good at writing copy you have to do a lot of reading. […]
-
The Marketing Rebel Team wrote a new post 11 years, 1 month ago
John Carlton Marketing Tips: How to Get Into a New Market Eva is a marketing consultant who wants to consult with geothermal companies. Â Her passion is renewable energy but the market is just emerging […]
Recent Member Lessons
John Carlton’s Best Ads: Butt-Ugly Golf
I've written something like 4,000 direct mail letters and direct response ads for golf products now. Okay, that's a bit of an exaggeration, but not much. Sometimes, the best ads come from sheer desperation. I was hitting the very bottom of my bag of tricks last year,...
John Carlton’s Best Ads: Everything And The Kitchen Sink #2 – Entire Library Of Fighting Videos
There are two ads referenced in this commentary. Â This is the second one (last couple of paragraphs). Another Rodale piece-- this time, they got impatient selling individual books about the various parts of men's lives... and decided to just lump everything together...
John Carlton’s Best Ads: The Financial Bloodbath Caused By Criminal Scum
Gary Halbert gets credit for the headline and concept on this one. I was working with him at the time, in the last days of the Reagan presidency, when the financial markets -- and especially the precious metals markets -- were causing investors migraines. Banks were...
John Carlton’s Best Ads: The Nearly-Crippled Businessman
Here is an early self-defense letter, which struck a major nerve in the customer base for this market. It's run every year for the last decade in the major magazines and mailed even more often to hotlists. The appeal is simple and to the point: This is hard-core...
Hi Jason. I just checked out your site.
When asking for critiques on anything, it’s good to give some background — like, for example, are you already getting traffic or sales to this page? If not, how are you going to get leads, and what kind of prospects are you looking for?
In this case, your perfect prospect would be an online company or an…Read more
Thank you very much for your time. I can’t tell you how much I appreciate it.
I narrowed down the focus to a company that has a marketing manager who is looking to add an Email Marketing / CRM manager to their team.
Here is the first paragraph rewritten:
Your Full Service Email Marketing Team Is Ready
Effective Email marketing is critical to…Read more